Going back to my classmate critique, I changed the cover font and text, so that it is more readable. As well as adding the page numbers to the bottom of the TOC and DPS.
For example,
The changes I made to the cover, were add a black outline to the text, to make it more readable. I also changed the font of the "See featured article inside!" part, to make it less random.
Next,
I added the page number to the bottom of the table of contents. As well as changing the page numbers for the articles. My teacher helped me by making me realize that putting the main article on page 2 is not realistic. So I changed it to page 5, and made the TOC page 2. As well as making the other articles flow with it, so changing the rest of them.
Lastly,
This was the original first draft of the double page spread, now this is the revised version:
All I did was add the page numbers at the bottom right corner.
Overall, the revisions were for the better, and I think that they complete the magazine by adding the final touches.
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